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Aug 25, 2007 22:14:28 GMT -8
Post by Imorta Thaw on Aug 25, 2007 22:14:28 GMT -8
Yes, I know, not happy at all... but I'm not too happy right now.... Confused, yes, happy? no.
Fire fire, It's a flame something burning something trying
Fire fire tween the vines falling falling close to dying
life and hope beneath our feet something in our heart we hid
love and lust forbidden fruit hidden far beneath the root
here and now and there and then torn apart and left for dead
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Aug 26, 2007 9:15:43 GMT -8
Post by Seventh Lass on Aug 26, 2007 9:15:43 GMT -8
i don't think i get that that well. what is torn apart and left for dead? though i do like the poem. it has a really nice rhythm
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Aug 26, 2007 9:52:32 GMT -8
Post by Imorta Thaw on Aug 26, 2007 9:52:32 GMT -8
I have no idea..... Just wrote and that came out.....
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Aug 26, 2007 23:06:20 GMT -8
Post by Seventh Lass on Aug 26, 2007 23:06:20 GMT -8
awesome.
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